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I’ve met enough people.
Seldom a human being
Therefore, I will wait
Until my life's purpose
Is fulfilled
And you will come
Though there is anguish
Deep in my soul
What if I must search for you forever?
I must not lose faith
I must not lose hope
Alena Synkova
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Hey Arely! I really understand why you decided to put the colors on your butterfly because one side is dark and one side is relaxing and calm. This shows how the author feels and what colors reprsent the emotions. The hands on the heart really captured the imagery in my head, feeling warm, love and, family. Although, I noticed that whenever you explained a feature on your butterfly, there was no quote to back your reasoning, For example, what gave you the idea of putting the moon in your butterfly? What line in your poem helps you discover the imagery? Pulling out quotes really gives you a clear and better understanding of the entire poem. Also, remember that the title of a poem requires quotes. Nice work Arely!
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