These evil clowns are roaming our neighborhoods. And they're spreading across the country. From one of the articles I have found a quote when the clowns first appeared it says, "On August 21st, a police deputy investigated reports of a clown with a white face paint trying to lure children into the dark thicket. A resident told him one of her sons had seen many clowns flashing green lights and her other son had heard pounding on the door and the sound of chains clanking. Other children told him that clowns had tried to tempt them with money and that the clowns live in the house by a pond deep in the woods".
The clowns come out in the day and night usually you'll find them in places that no one can see you like the woods and parks. They also stalk you around your house and try to scare you and these killer clowns send you letters with fake blood all over the letter. Is this important yes it is important because these clowns just appeared out of no where and they are trying to take over your life and kill you for some reason that people still can't explain. Some newscast say that they have found sightings of killer clowns usually occurring in the months leading up to Halloween.
This is a very interesting topic. Considering it happened not a long time ago. I would like to say Arely, that you should have an objective tone throughout your piece of writing. When you started off with " I have found out that around Berwyn....", make sure to not include I. Your grace note was excellent. I also saw that you missed spelling they're,instead you spelled they. " Why they doing this, change it to why they are doing this. In your first paragraph, near the ending, make sure to use commas for a pause in your sentence. Your piece of evidence explicitly ties back to your objective summary on the killer clowns. Your investigative journalism piece was great. Great Job!
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